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first 40 secs of my new paino song . suggestions wanted

cornbreadandmilk

cornbreadandmilk

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I have been writing this for someone very close to me for a long time. tell me what you think

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To me, it sounds like the opening notes of one song, followed by the opening notes of a different song/style, followed by yet another opener (and, again, a different style/mood). The last (the third melody) was the one I liked and wanted to hear more of. I listened to the recording twice, waited a few minutes, and now I don't even remember the first two melodies. The third one, though, I can still hear that one in my head.
 
GoFride said:
To me, it sounds like the opening notes of one song, followed by the opening notes of a different song/style, followed by yet another opener (and, again, a different style/mood). The last (the third melody) was the one I liked and wanted to hear more of. I listened to the recording twice, waited a few minutes, and now I don't even remember the first two melodies. The third one, though, I can still hear that one in my head.
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See I have been told that before ! I don't really notice the middle part but ill go back and listen . So should I rewrite the intro to the third part?
 
Yes, please do - I'd love to hear it. It was like hearing just a few seconds of an interesting conversation.
 
you sir inspire confidence. When I have a free day, I will start writing this again. I may find new software first the last stuff i used was horrid. (ANVIL STUDIO) do you know any good software?
 
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