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Essay Ideas

BloodyRed567

Jasmine
In my writing class we are going to be starting our compare & contrast Essay soon. I had an idea to compare a Corn Snake to some other Colubrid/Snake, but I'm not sure which kind since I only have experience with my one corn now. So I was wondering if anyone could point me into a direction of a species that is similar to corns yet, they have some differences, and would be fairly easy to express in writing. All help appreciated. I can look up care sheets/facts on my own just need basic facts and name of a Snake.
 
I'll look into King snakes. Thanks for replying. I hope I don't find yet another type of snake I'd be interested in owning someday.
 
The cali king I had, and the one I am currently baby sitting are evil little buggers that try to eat you at every turn. :) haha. So if you do end up wanting a king, get one that is a calm adult, not a baby!
 
I suppose it may depend what kind of theme you want to go for. In higher level writing, what sets a paper apart is not just the mechanics of a paper, or even the subject, but the depth of thoughts conveyed. Instead of just presenting data and saying "these data points are similar, while these other ones are different" you want to analyze the data you present and show how it supports some theme or purpose driving your paper.

Various species lend themselves well to particular themes.

For example, many new snake owners decide between two well promoted "starter snakes": corns and ball pythons. You could compare/contrast the two species from the point of view of a first time pet snake. Similarly, as people have already mentioned, there are also king snakes, for whom temperament differences are a potential concern.


If you want to take the perspective of husbandry, there is much to compare and contrast between "beginner level" snakes like corns and "advanced level" snakes like green tree pythons.

If you are writing to a non-herp friendly audience and want to convince them of the sanity of owning a pet corn snake, you could do a compare/contrast with a venomous or very large species (Burmese/reticulated pythons) perhaps. Perhaps from the perspective of say a tenant whose landlord/lady is not initially receptive to their choice in pets due to misconceptions. This one in particular has a way of being continually relevant when life creeps up on you and might even be useful to have sitting around years down the road.

From a scientific perspective there are interesting anatomical and phylogenetic differences among all the species of snakes, even and especially the lowly "primitive snakes" (like thread and blind snakes) in family Scolecophidia (as opposed to Alethinophidia, the family that contains most commonly known snakes including corns, pythons, boa's, etc). The evolutionary convergence of the green tree python and the emerald tree boa is fascinating and a source of much confusion even among herp keepers.

Artistically, there are many subjects to explore and expound upon in the portrayal of snakes in the arts and media. This could even be used in support of the theme of educating the "uninitiated".

In most of these themes, a foundational understanding of the anatomy and classification differences among snakes is useful. For example, corns are a subspecies of colubrids, which have significant differences from groups like pythons/boas/vipers/elapids. I would recommend using both the common names to appeal to the broader audience, and the scientific names for the sake of precision. This makes a worthy beginning to most themes, particularly if your rhetorical style tends toward logos, as long as everything you write you tie back clearly and strongly to your theme.

Whatever you end up doing, please do post! I for one would love to read it. :)
 
The starter snake(Corn Snake vs. Ball Python) idea sounds the the best subject to go for since I doubt anyone in my class even knows about Snakes or owns any. It would be interesting to educate as well as compare and contrast in the same essay. This is for a High school level writing class, so I will say I am not my very best at writing yet and I am trying to improve.

Thank you for all the great ideas. I enjoy writing and especially when it's about something I enjoy. I will post the essay when I am done writing and it is graded. c:
 
I would choose a subject I was fully conversant with to write about... Not something I hardly know about...
You would make a much better essay if you first understood what you were writing about...
 
I would choose a subject I was fully conversant with to write about... Not something I hardly know about...
You would make a much better essay if you first understood what you were writing about...
Ah but where's the fun in that? Or the learning?

I've just written a 5000 word essay on the phenomenology of British Iron Age Cemetery Bowls and am finishing a 5000 word petrology report on thin-sectioned Durotrigian pottery. Next week I'll be writing up a 2500 word essay on the Romano-British stone trade in south-eastern Dorset. Knew precious little about any of those topics when I started and now I'm more up to speed.

Knowing nothing is an ideal place from which to start learning! The main trick is in recognising - and acknowledging - that you know nothing in the first place.
 
I do believe that part of writing an essay is learning something new about the subject. Yes I may not know about Ball Pythons or King snakes, but I do know about Corns. I don't think it would be any fun if you didn't have to do any background research about a certain topic. I do enjoy learning new things hence why I am interested in the topic, to gain knowledge and be able to help others understand it too.
 
Just saying... If the essay is the subject being marked, I would write about something I could make a good essay out of... Why double the trouble.... Easiest way is the best way to excel...
 
Not necessarily. To each their own, but what do you gain out of it if you go the easiest route? I do enjoy challenging myself to do the best I can and more. Just because I don't know much about a topic doesn't mean I will do bad on the essay it just makes me try harder. Everyone has different preferences.
 
OK..... Start again...
You got a corn.. You know about them... Look at the essay subject.. You only know about Corns and no other snakes, so how can you make an easy comparison.
I bet you know about dogs, cats, fish birds..... Main stream pets...
So...
Use the Corn as the datum and value it against other main stream pets as a valid choice.... That's what I would do...
Except I would choose Morelia....
I could write a lecture on why snakes (Corns) are a valid choice over xxx
 
An easy comparison would be researching and learning about another type of snake similar to a corn. In no way are dogs, cats, fish, or birds comparable to a Corn. Also the comparison cannot be something completely unrelated like apples to oranges.
 
I could go on about this all day, but I just made this thread for ideas not discouragement. I know what I am capable of and what my teacher expects out of me.
 
Sorry... I though I had an idea... I looked at the meaning of ideas on wikipedia..
I was told wikipedia isn't to be trusted... D'oh...
So what are you asking then....
Please blow smoke up my ass is it?
I thought my (wikipedia) idea was quite good....
I won't bother next time...
BTW... It doesn't say snake essay... You could use pet essay which makes them comparable...
 
Jasmine, let me encourage you to just go for whatever topic sounds the most interesting. That's how you will get the most out of it, I think. I know for myself, writing essays about things I already know well is dull and boring, and I do much better otherwise. Even a subject I think I know well I end up going and researching and learning more and going deeper and then I tend to get really esoteric anyway, which does work out, but then it amounts to the same thing. Also, don't let being in high school feel too limiting. High school is about prepping for college right? Then shoot for the next level up. The form and structure really should be the same or similar, probably (I don't know exactly what your teacher is like, but in theory: intro paragraph with thesis, supporting paragraphs, conclusion paragraph sound about right?), and form and structure are simply algorithmic and change depending on the current accepted style. Of first importance is the content: the depth of analysis and thought put in, so absolutely don't be afraid to learn or try something new just because "it's for marks".
 
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